let me be free
tie not my spirit
with how I should be
just let me be free
let me sing
with the tinkling chimes
let me dance
with the gusty winds
let me cry
heartbroken in rain
and indulge in rhyme
pardon me, but
that’s how I feel alive
let me fight crime
let me forget time
let me be me
judge me if you like
but, set me free…
3 comments:
hey sarayu, indake naku scrap pedadhamanukunna...chala rojulayyindhi ne blog lo kotha updates leka.......anyway, about this one.......if this was a story i would say pitta katha.......but, for a poem its like a cute..little......thought expressed clearly with a feel that probably never ends..............
bye, harsha
Hey a very nice and small one, i think with the poetic skill u have u can extend this more. The picture is apt, good job again.
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Admirer
A free spirit on a swing is a great illustration to a poem whose narrator wants to be free to achieve her desires - poetry, peace. Beautiful feelings.
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