when you don't know
what you want
what will you do
rather not do?
what is this void
in my soul ?
its place in my
enchanted skies?
has it made the
distance infinite?
does it pride
in this journey endless?
Will I conquer
this numbness I feel ?
or will I let it
dictate my destiny?
I dont know
this way back,
the map to home ,
long lost...
yet I heard
that voice,
across my fears
"you will make it",
and I know,
That's I.
5 comments:
This poem has a lovely hopefulness to its ending.
It starts slow but ends up boosting your soul, I like this one a lot.
Good Job
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Admirer
I was heartened to hear the optimism at the end of the poem, in the face of what seemed like despair. Very delicate.
Many well-posed questions here, I can empathise.
This started out very somber, but looks up in the end - a lovely sentiment and well-expressed emotion.
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