No space I get to be..
Every where I see
A never ending sea…
And still I hear your voice
& feel you are there…
People change
And so did I, too
Cant help the world
If I am too bad
Guess, I don't belong there
Cause it never mattered
To me….
Yes! it never mattered to me…
That I wasn't there
Even in your dreams….
And suddenly………
Everywhere I see
A never ending sea…
Nosp ace I get to be..
5 comments:
Really a very good one. Now this one has lot of meaning hidden. The picture is also apt. Good job again....
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Happened by your blog; I think it's brilliant - your poetry, the pictures especially are so very appropriate (I like the one with just the hand showing - evokes mystery and curiousity; think I'll use the idea sometime!) Did you take any of the pictures?
Your last few poems I must say have been exceptional.... But there was one thing common to all of them.....All of them have a slightly gloomy connotation to them suggesting you are perhaps hurt or something....Just so you get out of that mindset, try and focus on the positive things around you and look how everything turns out to be bright and pleasant...
Good Luck!!!!
Seems to be good one came out with lot of thinking.. but its confusing or may be I'm not deep enough to understand. Please post a simple version of this for me.
Hey
Hope you are doing gud!!! Hey I just wanted to tell you there are few around who check your blog regularly and feel disappointed on not finding any updates :-(
I thought u would come up somthing with NEW YEAR theme.
BTW, wish u n ur family a very happy n prosperous new year.
Cherios
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Admirer
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