Friday, November 09, 2007

Mind Game


My brain is a funny place
I make castles of sand,
and It makes the high tides

(Alzheimer's)

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey! great thoughts,, loved all of them.. keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

Welcome to the I Promise blogroll! I've read several of your poems here, and enjoyed them all, but somehow this short little one is the one that keeps pulling me back today - it says so very much in such spare words. VERY nice work!

writerwoman said...

I am going to mention this poem at PWB.

I find it evokes worlds of emotion in a just a few words. It touches me.

DayDreamer said...

Thought provoking and thoughtful. A powerful poem in a few brief lines.

Jo said...

This is lovely, so much said with such economy -- I can hear the sea swirling. The image is beautiful too.