Monday, July 28, 2008

Between you and Air





At times I feel
I am between your cigar and ash
that thin curve of smoke
which dares not touch your breath
vanishes in a minute,
and quite forgotten the next
cause its always at the other end…

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Sravya, the comparision is too sensitive....

writerwoman said...

Brillant work. I am including this poem in January's Poets Who Blog Collection. It will be linked to from PWB on Jan 30th.

Sara
PWB Manager

paisley said...

a most delicate chasm in which to find oneself.... expertly done.....

Brian said...

very cool. original. fresh.

Anonymous said...

better this is better than any of your other work

James said...

Your poems are excellent and work is marvelous. Why there isn't any posts recently.